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Inside the void we call home
I'm struggling to breath fresh air
My senses are starting to weaken
without new hope we're all lost

When from a throng of black and white
I hear my name being called
there is a flutter of wings above
and a bluebird takes off for tomorrow

The thought of seeing someone else
who looks into the reflective mirror
and sees not a face staring back
Can you take me into your arms?

There is always a shuffle of feet
but no certain voice to listen to
Eyes follow no certain direction
and are blind to the sides

If for any other reason I laugh
and I have not lost the will to think
Pull me back into the crimson tide
the only place I really want to be

But the moment is fading dark
and when my eyes adjust to the dull
I find facing me on the ground
a single, isolated blue feather
©2007-2009 ~Imagine-Love
:iconimagine-love:

Author's Comments

Let me say this for all who read the poem:

Some of you might not get it, the deeper meaning behind it. If not, it's understandable. Mainly only the ones who have been 'there' will know what this poem means. However, I can't explain what 'there' is; all I can say is that it exists...


Song: Pieces (c) L'arc-en-Ciel
Poem: Don't Awaken Me (c) Imagine-Love

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:iconwrath-chu:
This is very well done sweetie, I really like it. I love your word choice, the poem really flows well. It reminds me alot of Pride and Wrath in a way to be honest. ^^;

Again, well done.

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“I can never decide whether my dreams are the result of my thoughts, or my thoughts the result of my dreams.” - D.H. Lawrence


*Insert NaNoWriMo Quote Here* Ghost Opera: -Currently In Progress-

:library: : -Known Spaztic Bibliophile And Proud Of It-
:iconmachinexjunkie:
-hugs- That's really good. You word everything so beautifully.

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'Cause nobody wants to do it on their own
And everyone wants to know they're not alone
There's somebody else that feels the same somewhere
There's gotta be somebody for me out there
:iconsonikki-valentine:
Oh.. It's so beautiful!!
Awesomely written my friend! :hug:
:iconimagine-love:
Thankies. :3

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I was born for seeing you.
:iconimagine-love:
Thank you. :3

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I was born for seeing you.
:iconimagine-love:
Thank you. :heart:

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I was born for seeing you.
:iconwrath-chu:
^^ Welcome.

--
“I can never decide whether my dreams are the result of my thoughts, or my thoughts the result of my dreams.” - D.H. Lawrence


*Insert NaNoWriMo Quote Here* Ghost Opera: -Currently In Progress-

:library: : -Known Spaztic Bibliophile And Proud Of It-
:iconmissmew:
I agree - your choice of words and the flow of it is all great. Amazing work.
I like "bluebird takes of for tomorrow" part. A lot.

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“Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind," said Dr. Seuss
:iconwowkrynne:
Oo I like the bluebird and blue feather connection!!

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Join the club!!! :heart: ~The-Zax-Club

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